This is a place for all you guys to place crit for my characters at anytime so we don't have to wait for the next HMD. If you feel that I'm slipping, dislike a quirk I added, have a problem with a certain event, or just plain feel like I'm DOIN' IT WRONG, let me know! I will do my best to either explain my choice if I think it was just, or try to fix up the problems at people's suggestions.

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So this post applies to ALL of my characters are-

Haruhi Suzumiya (godisagirl)
Minatsuki Takami (tainted_flowers)

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When did I start to have so many people that I rely on? I used to do everything by myself, always by myself. I was fine with it. I could go where I wanted and do what I wanted. Not that it mattered, no one understood what I wanted anyway. They all wanted to sit around and watch TV but I was the weird girl who was looking for weird things.

It didn't matter, I didn't need them. But now I need people. It's so frustrating! It ties you down because you're so attatched! It's full of obligations and you have to give up things you want!

But then again, I've had more fun with the brigade then I did alone. We went to mysterious islands, solved cases, even performed at the school festival. And then I found this place and I've gone to different worlds, different planets, beyond what I ever wanted. I don't ever want to lose that.

I still want to find things on my own but still I...I just want to be useful to them. To repay for what they've given me. Be a leader who knows what she's doing and not a damsel in distress.

GREETINGS MEMBERS OF THE HARUHI CAST AND FRIENDS OF THE CAST.





Now, in all seriousness, I am proposing that we play through some of the new episodes of the current season, Orly and I have talked about it but that was quite awhile ago. I think the ideal episodes/plots to play through would be All of the Vanishment of Haruhi Suzumiya. I also think doing Snow Mountain Syndrome would be fun too and it would be good to get DDD friends in on these plots.

I think that doing Bamboo Leaf Rhapsody would be good too since Vanishment sort of revolves around that. But Haruhi as herself isn't really involved so it would be more about Kyon, Mikuru, and maybe idk Ten? Up to you guys.

But yeah! Let's use this post for discussion and ideas. I'll provide a brief summary for those who have not read the novels.

Vanishment: Kyon finds himself in an alternate dimension where Haruhi never attended North High and the SOS Brigade is never created.

Snow Mountain: The Brigade is trapped in a strange cabin where the flow of time is disturbed and they are unable to escape.

Bamboo Leaf Rhapsody: Kyon goes back in time, meets 12 yr old Haruhi and inspires her to believe in aliens, time travlers, and ESPers.

EDIT: IF YOU CAN, I'D ASK THAT ALL PEOPLE WHO WANT TO BE INVOLVED, TRACK THIS POST SO THEY KNOW WHAT OTHER PEOPLE ARE TALKING ABOUT AND WHAT'S GOING ON.

Ugh.

You know those stupid scenes in anime and manga where an accident happens? A guy falls on the girl after a bath "accidental pervert" like and it's supposed to make you start shipping those two characters?

It's not like that at all in real life! It was stupid and embarassing and my back is all bruised up and it's hard to move, nothing cute about that!

Some anime makers are real idiots!

[is in her room trying to bandage the wound on her chest she got from Alize. It's a long cut running from the bottom of her breast bone to a bit before her collar bone, it's not deep enough to be life threatening, but it probably hurts. There's a bloody shirt on the floor and Haruhi is struggling to manage with the gauze and bandages all by herself]

[her voice is slightly tired and though it's still cheerful, something is definitely off]

I'm back.

And nothing bad happened at all, we were able to help Alize. She's okay now.

Now I have a lot of homework to catch up on, so none of you bother me! And Kyon, get your ass over here to drop off the papers I need.

And Setsuna, you aren't getting anything from me for your birthday until you give me the presents you owe me! You have to put out first.

[locked to Hakuba, Kaito, and Alize]

Don't tell anyone that I got hurt. They'll just worry about something that's not a big deal at all.

And don't feel bad about it, Alize. I'm the leader of the SOS Brigade, it's just a tiny scratch to me! I can take a lot more than that before I'm taken down.

((ooc: the RL for the plot is still ongoing! I just wanted Haruhi to be able to post around the comm again~))

[a click, and the message plays, and Haruhi's voice is heard]

You've probably noticed that I'm gone. And before you freak out, I haven't been kidnapped or posessed or anything like that. I'm too smart for those things!

[she pauses, her voice more serious]

I went to help Alize, she-she needs my help. And if I had said something, people would have tried to stop me. It can't be done without me, I'm the only one who knows where she is. And even if I didn't, I can't just leave her like that! The leader of the SOS Brigade needs to be loyal to her friends.

I don't know when I'll be back, but if you don't think I will be, you're an idiot. It's going to take a lot more than whatever she's doing to stop me! It's gonna be okay, but not unless I do something. Kaito and Hakuba-san will be with me too.

Ituski, the brigade is your responsibility until I come back, and if I find things are all messed up when I do, you'll get the death penalty five times over! And you guys on the TARDIS better not go somewhere awesome when I'm gone or else you'll get it too, ten times over.

So wait for me.

[the recording clicks off]

((OOC: No replies obviously, but the actual RL with Alize is going down here for reference! ...So talk amongst yourselves?))

This virus is so lame. You'd think people would have more important things to think about. Like...porn, or my stupid sexy brother, or something more than worrying.

How the hell did I get affected? Did I catch it from Setsuna? Either way...I hate it! No one deserves to know my thoughts.

[Haruhi is up and about in the middle of the night, still wearing her pajamas of an undershirt and her panties. The TARDIS is quiet because everyone else is asleep and it's weird for her to be awake, but nightmares tended to wake her up. She yawned and opened the door to Lockon's room, hoping to crawl into bed with him. She opened the door and poked her head in]

[Haruhi stood outside of Cuddy's office, after Donna dropped her off, trying to look inconspicous. She was really hoping this wasn't going to get too awkward]

Lisa, answer my question.

The internet says that after you have sex, you're supposed start seeing a special girl Doctor. Do I really have to? I don't want to go if it's a dumb waste of my time.

[is waiting for Setsuna to get ready and gather his stuff before they start hiking up to the camping area. She has a sleeping bag, a pan, and some clothes with her along with a telescope. She turns to setsuna who is carring the food and the tent]

Hurry up!

Well fine, I didn't want to go on a stupid Valentine's date anyway. It'd just make me another statistic.

Now I can spend my time doing better things, like planning things for the SOS-Brigade.

Stupid boys.

So I've been getting a lot of heavy crit on Haruhi lately and I know there are areas I need to work on, and I want to improve. I'm putting them down here to show that I'm aware of them and willing to work on them. I have found that I don't work well when I rp things that lack canon references so there are things that I need to:

-Less angst. I've been trying to do more silly things with her.

-When there is angst, not going over board. Haruhi isn't overly emotional in that sense even if she's new to caring.

-Less vunerability. She can show her softer side to a few people, but she'd try to hide it or deny it as well.

Anything else?

Haruhi, I think I managed to get you top marks on your first exam today! But really, that exam was almost horribly easy. No, really, it was! English exam. I mean, come on, I've met Shakespeare, I point and laugh at English exams. Which is probably just as well because I still can't figure out how to sit in these uniforms properly.

I think I'm wearing these skirts wrong. Mikuru kept giving me odd looks out of the corner of her eyes. And I swear someone might have tried to look up my skirt. Ugh. Itsuki and Kyon have been really helpful though. I don't know if Yuki's even noticed that there's something different about Haruhi. Um. That is, something different about me.

Does she really always sit there and read like that?

[Locked to Setsuna]

Setsuna, can I have a word?

I've thought about it really really hard and I've decided.

I forgive you.

And you better be really greatful because I've never forgiven anyone like this and probably never ever will again, so you're really lucky that I like you so much.

So it's alright now, got that? Oniichan?

Can't believe I'm that sort of drunk, how embarrassing, crying like a stupid child over nothing. And then I got so sick, ugh, at least there were few people there.

And Setsuna had to go and take care of me, so lame. Maybe it's better that I only remember some of it or else it would be even more embarrassing. I guess maybe I should say sorry to him

ugh I still feel terrible

((ooc: so we haven't technically played this out but I wanted to get this up to keep things moving along~))